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[戴云山] 2018.4.29-4.30戴云山外籍会员对接总结——王景鹏

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发表于 2018-5-4 17:59:11 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 布拉格 于 2018-5-4 22:06 编辑

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看了几篇总结,都提到了外籍会员的问题,而我是这次主要对接者,必须写些东西(当时又要负责翔安装备,肯定有很多纰漏,希望大家指出批评,为以后外出提供宝贵建议)

【报名】:我,兴婷各帮两个报名,沁雅周四体训时加入

【组成】:四个印度,一个哈沙克斯坦(沁雅)

五个合照

五个合照
【前期准备】:创了个微信群,将外籍会员和思鸿拉入,后来把洪美拉入介绍文建(没效果),我负责装备方面翻译,思鸿负责daily life

A.<装备注意事项>

      Advance notice,

please study carefully when leading equipment

1.The mountaineering bag is forbidden to exert force on one shoulder, forbiddingone-shoulder strength and forbidding one-shoulder force.  this is very, very very important,

2.Waistring must be buckled, buckle waist ring, buckle waist ring, buckle waist ring(not buckle, punish boys twenty push-ups, girls ten push-ups)

3.Afterthe things are installed, all the buttons should be buckled.

4.Thetrekking poles are used according to your own situation. If you have them,please put them upright during the break. Do not lay them on the ground toprevent them from being bent.

pleasereply [your name+ok or not]


B.<职务告知>

1.Vishalis responsible for taking pictures and taking photos of what you think makessense.try your best to take a photo for everybody.

2.Beibeiis responsible to make a note of what you are happy or what you see during thejourney. Finally, write an essay in English to express your feelings. You canwrite this together.

3.Vishesh, Vaishali and 沁雅,youare Logistics and  you are responsiblefor backing some of the food, Food will give you tomorrow

pleasereply it's ok or not +your name

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C.<出发前一天再次强调>

                   Emphasize again

1.About time... we will meet tomorrow, April 29th, at 7:10am in the canteen, (soyou must get up early)we need to distribute food, including bread, steam bread.

Don't be late, wait or not depending on thesituation. Arrived within 10 minutes , every late minute, punishment: boys 20 ,girls 10 push-ups; Pay attention to the concept of time, late is not a goodcharacter!

2.It is forbidden to carry private goods but emergency food is not included inthis list. Emergency food includes:

(1)Chocolate, Snickers, total 70g or less;

(2)compressed biscuits, the total amount of 120g or less;

(3)Both 1 and 2 are carried, and the total amount should be below 120g;

3.if there are no special circumstances, It is forbidden to exceed the leader inthe march and to lay behind  the closest;

4.It is forbidden to leave the team without the consent of the team leader,captain or other team members appointed by the leader or captain .

5,use fire cautiously;

6,no smoking, alcohol during the trip;

7,collect  personal garbages, there must beenvironmental awareness; prohibited littering,

8, On the equipment ... ... please cherish the equipment, you may be back a fewthousand dollars, so carefully read the,,,advance attention that i send .Directly  found the problem, you will bepunished,  but  do not ask why,  becausethis is the rules

Donot ask why ~ this is the rule

9,tableware ..recommending【 lunch box +chopsticks or spoons】, prohibiteddisposable tableware, three bottle of water

10.It is recommended to bring slippers, change clothes, because  it's comfortable when camping...

pleasereply  [your name +understand or not]

未扣腰环惩罚

未扣腰环惩罚

D.<回来提醒整理装备>

Daiyun Equipment Return

Because of the weather, maybe this trip giveyou a bad impression. But I am very happy to have an unforgettable experiencewith you all. While you are happy and happy, please do not forget to tidy upthe equipment!

Requirements1) The sleeping bag should be air-dried, and the moisture-proof mat and matmust be brushed clean and then dry (do not expose to the sun too long).

(2)The mountaineering bag and the rain cover should be wiped cleanly (do not use astiff brush). You can wipe it with a damp cloth. . Do not use any detergent.Please don't miss your own items and rubbish in mountaineering bags (specialattention to side pockets, top pockets, etc.). Remember! All backpack bucklesand straps tighten when returning.

(3) to confirm that the equipment you havereceived is not lost or damaged. It has been processed to a clean and tidystate that it can be returned, otherwise it will be sent back and re-arranged.

(4)Please gather in the east gate on the 4th, May (Friday) at 12:30 punctually andI will take you to the equipment room to return the equipment. If you cannotarrive, please find someone to replace it. please don't be late,

Isuggest cycling so that you can come punctually

Finally,I hope everyone will have fun.

pleasereply [your name +understand or not ]


E.<职务总结>

Jobsummary

1.Beibeiwrites an article expressing your own feelings. You can write down the warmth,friendship, mutual help and assistance you have experienced along the way, andthe unforgettable things you experienced through each place and every break. Ofcourse, you can also  make complaints andyou can write with other people, write it and send me a Word Document

2.Vishal,you can send directly the photos and videos you took  to me in WeChat.

3.VisheshRana, vaishali and 沁雅,you don't havesomething, but  if you want to write downyour feelings, you can also write a little article to me,

Pleasesend me  before Thursday


问题

1.沟通问题无疑是存在的,这属于硬伤,在次我不作陈述,

2.人数问题:这次有五个,偏多,下次应该控制在2个或3个,等协会具有一定国际化能力后再适当增加。

3.迟到问题:这次因为我预料到他们会迟到,再加上他们中有三个后勤,而东平这边7:00可以拿到馒头和水煮蛋,所以我给他们定的是7:10在食堂集合,分配后勤(还有特香包),一起吃饭后在前往南门集合(原计划是7:50大家南门集合),,但………7:10我到的时候,只有沁雅和我一起到达(东平已经拿到后勤),另外四个外籍会员直到7:30之后才到达,而且装后勤时发现他们的包完全没有撑开,而这时想7:50按时到达南门时间已经很紧张了,于是我和东梅&#128527;&#128527;各自带了些后勤,打算在车上重新分配————反思:这次因为是先在食堂集合,即使他们准时到了,我们也可以说先吃饭再分配后勤,然后走到南门,中间的40分钟可以很快过去,但如果是直接在南门集合,那沁雅这样准时到的人就要为别人的迟到买单,这是非常不公平的。此处说一下:不同地方对时间概念理解是不一样,就像如果你去非洲一些地方,你可能会发现那儿根本就没有准时这一说法,印度很多时候也差不多,所以我们不应该过分责怪他们,我们能做的就是尽量强调时间,让他们意识到迟到的后果,避免错过车

4.装备问题:对他们进行的装备注意提醒只有我发的advancenotice和领装备时的一些提醒示范,但这些太杯水车薪了,以至于出现很多次单肩受力......的错误,(欣慰的一点是下包不扣腰环没怎么出现)

5. 职务问题:这次翔安这边安排了三个后勤,而且全部是外籍会员(Vishesh, Vaishali, 沁雅),所以志国拜托了东梅帮忙买,最后分配一下,这个职务我个人觉得很合适,没出现什么问题。还安排了一个摄影(Vishal),据反映有个外籍会员喜欢停下来拍这拍那,或许就是他,这个职务下次不建议安排,因为他们不知道摄影对人的要求,容易拖慢行进速度。最后一个贝贝安排了抒情队记(beibei),这个行进中是飞飞飞常水的了,回来后,要求她用英语写下自己的感受,个人感觉写的挺好的,我把她写的队记放在了附件,想看的自己点开或找我要
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-4 18:00:24 | 显示全部楼层
来看阅读理解啦
发表于 2018-5-4 18:12:50 | 显示全部楼层
建议不要直呼“外国人”,可用“外籍会员”来称呼。

点评

目测全改了  发表于 2018-5-4 18:16
发表于 2018-5-5 01:12:26 | 显示全部楼层
翻译辛苦了
发表于 2018-5-5 08:03:29 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Lexie 于 2018-5-5 08:19 编辑

不是强迫症的我看到这么多单词之间都没有空格有些看不下去。
以及大部分都太啰嗦了,通知就重要的是简捷明了,才能突出重要性。
有些序号开头大写,有些小写,不是强迫症的我看着也非常别扭。
为啥有那么多奇奇怪怪的省略号。
Afterthe things are installed 改成When you finish packing
1.About time... we will meet tomorrow, April 29th, at 7:10am in the canteen, (soyou must get up early)we need to distribute food, including bread, steam bread.
Don't be late, wait or not depending on thesituation. Arrived within 10 minutes , every late minute, punishment: boys 20 ,girls 10 push-ups; Pay attention to the concept of time, late is not a goodcharacter! 改成
Gathering Time: April 29, AM 07:10
Do not be late or 20 push-ups (10 for the girl)for every minute you are late
change clothes 改成
a change of clothes.
youare Logistics 改成
you belong to Logistics
backing some of the food 改成
carrying food
you don't havesomething 天呀!这啥?
If you cannotarrive, please find someone to replace it. 改成
please find someone to return it.
On the equipment ... ... please cherish the equipment, you may be back a fewthousand dollars, so carefully read the,,,advance attention that i send .Directly  found the problem, you will bepunished,  but  do not ask why,  becausethis is the rules
改成
Cherish the equipment or be punished for the damage
tableware ..recommending【 lunch box +chopsticks or spoons】, prohibiteddisposable tableware, three bottle of water 改成
Bring dishware such as lunch box and spoons. No disposable dishware !!!



发表于 2018-5-5 08:08:48 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Lexie 于 2018-5-5 08:12 编辑

徐妈的未来靠你们这些肯干事情的孩子!超级无敌棒,比起一些人只提意见却不做出任何实质性努力,你去实践去努力肯为此付出时间,真的超级无敌棒!有些时候问题大家都知道,都明白,只是缺人手去踏踏实实地做出改变。你真棒!你真棒!你真棒!
发表于 2018-5-5 13:15:41 | 显示全部楼层
Lexie 发表于 2018-5-5 08:08
徐妈的未来靠你们这些肯干事情的孩子!超级无敌棒,比起一些人只提意见却不做出任何实质性努力,你去实践去 ...

原来图图还关爱着协会呐,开心~那么久都看不到你人了~sad
发表于 2018-5-5 13:17:17 | 显示全部楼层
给布拉格点赞~~写这些真的要花费很多心血的~

点评

哈哈哈哈哈哈  发表于 2018-5-6 03:52
好吧标题写了自己名字没看到不算不算不猜了  发表于 2018-5-5 23:31
猜猜他是谁  发表于 2018-5-5 23:31
发表于 2018-5-5 23:07:33 | 显示全部楼层
Lexie 发表于 2018-5-5 08:03
不是强迫症的我看到这么多单词之间都没有空格有些看不下去。以及大部分都太啰嗦了,通知就重要的是简捷明了 ...

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈 难为图图了 恐怕你听见我和他们交流时候讲的话要炸
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